English Writing Exercise

Describing People

Using both a positive and a negative characteristic, describe six different people: a woman, a man, a boy, a girl, you and me. Ex. The man is not rich. He is poor.

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刘丽
I am a women .I am tall. I am young.
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Submitted: 2009-12-12 01:28:24




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  • 2008-05-30 16:32:48
    Lingvo_Amanto-[...
    Nice effort! :D 'WOMEN' is the PLURAL form of 'WOMAN' You can also write: I'm a woman. I'm tall and young.
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  • 2008-05-30 19:51:25
    Awen
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  • 2008-05-30 19:51:46
    Awen
    I am a tall, young and pretty woman.
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  • 2008-06-01 13:11:52
    jemmy
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  • 2008-06-01 13:11:59
    jemmy
    good
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  • 2008-11-05 23:49:07
    Iwan Santos
    The word ''women'' is on the plural ,so will be ''woman'.
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  • 2009-01-18 20:54:05
    David

    Good try. There are many ways of saying it.

    I am a tall young woman.

    I am a woman, young and tall.

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  • 2009-05-14 20:26:44
    iran

    You are woman. You are tall. You are young.and you are very beautifull.

    What your name????

     

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  • 2009-06-12 17:19:54
    Ricardo Rudnick
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    Very Nice my friend. But Women is the plural. The correct is Woman. =)But good job. Bye

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  • 2009-07-02 00:38:51
    Wok

    I am a women woman.(You have used the plural which means more than one lady.Woman-one person, is called the singular)

     I am tall. I am young. This is correct and can be written with many variations.

    I am tall and young.

    I am tall for a young person.

    I am young and tall. 

     

    Many options for you.

     

    Well done and good luck for the remainder of your learning

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  • 2009-09-19 02:51:54
    Bill Barnhill
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    OK, but where are the other 5 people?

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  • 2009-12-12 01:28:24
    andre martinez

    hola  soñorita de china  quisiera comunicarme con usted  para conocernos y ser buenos amigos  si quiere escriba mi correo y agregueme ... mlboli_335@hotmail.com.  te cuidas  hermosa...  I AM from colombian.  thanks beautifull......

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