Your last vacation
Instructions:
Describe your last vacation. Where did you most recently visit on holiday? What activities and attractions can you recommend to other travelers?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 5
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I went to China. I was very happy when I was traveling to China.
I saw very interesting things. China's history is very old and famous.
I do not know how to recommend the other vacationers.
I saw very interesting things. China's history is very old and famous.
I do not know how to recommend the other vacationers.
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This is very good Jerry. But it would have been better if you recommended it to other vacationers so they, too, can see how beautiful China is. How are you?