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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 10, Lesson 1

Describe your clothes

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe what you are wearing right now. What is it made of? How do you usually dress for work? What do you wear when you go to events and parties? What is your favorite outfit?

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My city is an industrial one. We had Renault until last year that produced cars, now Ford is in town with new models for city cars and not only. "Craiova" is the name of my city, placed in the South of Romania and it is called the "Fountain City" also ..there are a lots of fountains, but the bigest remain the one placed in the center of the city. There is a program for that fountain, it starts at 9:00 pm and it last for one hour. During the day it's also open but only one hour a day you can see the musical program. They run Mozart, Bach or Beethoven.
Another thing that we are prode of is the park. Is one of the bigest natural park of Europe, the third one. Come and visit Craiova to find nice people, traditions and old buildings witch history and culture were always in our interes.
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  • cgdm
    Mochapoints: 35829  |  Teacher Score: 22016 (100%)

    My city is an industrial one. We had Renault until last year that produced cars, now Ford is in the town with new models for city cars and not only. "Craiova" is the name of my city, placed in the South of Romania and it is called the "Fountain City" also ..there are a lots of fountains, but the biggest one remains the one placed in the center of the city. There is a program for that fountain, it starts at 9:00 pm and it lasts for one hour. During the day it's also open but only one hour in a day you can see the musical program. They run Mozart, Bach or Beethoven. Another thing, that we are proud of, is the park. It is one of the biggest natural parks of in Europe, the third one. Come and visit Craiova to find nice people, traditions. and old buildings which have history and culture were always in our interests.

    good job Mirela. I couldnt understand ur last sentence very well, i divided it into 2. Maybe i corrected it wrong :(

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  • Yasinn
    Mochapoints: 24657  |  Teacher Score: 9776 (97%)

    My city is an industrial one. We had Renault until last year that produced cars, now Ford is in town with new models for city cars and more. "Craiova" is the name of my city, located South of Romania  known as the "Fountain City" because there are a lots of fountains, but the biggest one remains the one placed in the center of the city. The fountain is programmed. It starts at 9:00 p.m. and lasts for an hour. During the day it's also open but only one hour a day so you can listen to the music it plays. They play Mozart, Bach or Beethoven. Another thing that we are proude of is the park. It is the third biggest natural parks in Europe. Come and visit Craiova to find nice people, tradition and old buildings.  History and culture are always among our interest.

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  • Yasinn
    Mochapoints: 24657  |  Teacher Score: 9776 (97%)

    My city is an industrial one. We had Renault until last year that produced cars, now Ford is in town with new models for city cars and more. "Craiova" is the name of my city, located South of Romania  known as the "Fountain City" because there are a lot of fountains, but the biggest one remains the one placed in the center of the city. The fountain is programmed. It starts at 9:00 p.m. and lasts for an hour. During the day it's also working but only one hour a day so you can listen to the music it plays. They play Mozart, Bach or Beethoven. Another thing that we are proud of is the park. It is the third biggest natural park in Europe. Come and visit Craiova to find nice people, tradition and old buildings.  History and culture are always among our interest.

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  • Professor
    Mochapoints: 94726  |  Teacher Score: 89487 (100%)

    Very nicely done, Mirela!  Your paragraph makes me want to visit your town!  Maybe one day ...  :-)

    My city is an industrial one. We had Renault produced cars here until last year that produced cars, but now Ford is in town with new models for city cars and not only and more. "Craiova" is the name of my city; it is located placed in the south of Romania.  and It is also called the "Fountain City". also There are a lots of fountains, but the biggest remain is the one placed in the center of the city. There is a musical program for that fountain; it starts at 9:00 pm and it lasts for one hour.  During the day it's also open, but only one hour a day you can only see the musical program at 9:00 pm.  They run perform Mozart, Bach or Beethoven.  Another thing that we are proud of is the park.  It is one of the third biggest natural park of in Europe, the third one.  Come and visit Craiova to find nice people, traditions and old buildings architecture witch reflect our interesting history and culture. were always in our interest.

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  • MOHAMMAD
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    I don't have more to say except i encourage you in every submission you add.

    keep the good work, good luck.

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  • AnikinMW
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    My city is an industrial one. Until last year, we had only Renault who produced cars, but now Ford is also in town with new models for city cars and more. "Craiova" is the name of my city, placed in the South of Romania; and it is also called the "Fountain City", because there are a lots of fountains (or, it is also called the "Fountain City" for its many fountains) but and the biggest is the one placed in the city center. There is a program for that fountain, which starts at 9:00pm and it lasts for one hour. During the day it's also open but only for one hour, a day when you can listen to it. It plays Mozart, Bach, or Beethoven. Another thing that we are proud of is the park. It is the third biggest natural park in Europe (or, It is one of the biggest parks in Europe). Come and visit Craiova to find nice people, traditions, and old buildings with history and culture that have always been in our interest, too.

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