Introduce yourself
Instructions:
Introduce yourself. Tell us your name, how you are doing, where you are from, where you live, where you work, etc.
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 1
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A man with style and beauty . A woman with personality and beauty . A boy is fat and young . A girl is tall and beautifull. I am young , handsome and friendly . You are young , thin and a good person .
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There is an exception here.
"is good person" cannot be used. You need "a good person". I can't explain, but please remember it.
"Beauty of boys", should normally describe it as handsome.
Beautiful, only 1 "L"
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you have to write "a good person" and if you are writing in the 1st person sigular, then "you are a good person"
beautiful - with one "l"
beauty of boys - should be better handsome
beautiful (one l)
i am agree with all comments
great :D definately better
the one thing - vocabulary. beautiful and beautiful repeats too often bat that's a very small mistake.
Hi my new friend!You wrote quite well.But you took mistakes..Let's me see..Firstly,you must talk that ''A man is with''not ''A man with..Because in this sentence,you forgot Tobe verb!!The second sentence is similiar.Next,when you want to describe people you use adjectives not nouns..You must write that''SHe is beautiful ''not ''beauty''.Because beauty is a noun of beautiful.ok?That is all which i want to correct your grammar..Thank you for hearing!