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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 1

Describing your day

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson describe your day. What time is it now? What time was it 20 minutes ago? What time did you wake up this morning? What time will you go to bed?

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Well ! I ordered at cafe for one vegetarian pastry and a medium size coke.My favourite drink is orange juice and pineapple juice. Yes,as I already explained I have ordered for Pastry
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  • shajosh
    Mochapoints: 48597  |  Teacher Score: 48335 (0%)
    little bit hungry. You have spoken about today. The question asked is about your routine. You need to write what you order whenever you visit a cafe.
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  • AWARE
    Mochapoints: 1757  |  Teacher Score: 546 (100%)
    good use full stop when u end.
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  • Sally Moore
    Mochapoints: 370181  |  Teacher Score: 358670 (100%)

    Well ! I ordered a vegetarian pastry and a medium Coke at the cafe for one vegetarian pastry and a medium size coke. [Leave a space after the period.] My favourite drink is orange juice and pineapple juice. Yes, as I already explained I have ordered for pastry.

    This is well written, again. I suggested a different word order, but other than that, I can understand what you are saying. Keep up the good work!  \o/

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