Describing People
Instructions:
Describe six different people, using a positive and negative descriptive word: a woman, a man, a boy, a girl, you and me. Ex. The boy is young and not tall.
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 2
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The man is not handsome he is friendly . The woman is not greedy
she is lenient . The boy is not tall he is short . The girl is not old she is young . I am not rich i am poor . You are not bad you are good .
she is lenient . The boy is not tall he is short . The girl is not old she is young . I am not rich i am poor . You are not bad you are good .
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The woman is not have rapacity she is have lenience . = The women doesn't have the rapacity, she has a lenience.. or she is not having.. or she is not greedy..
yes.. the only thing - the woman doesn't have rapacity, she has lenience
* "the man is not handsome, he is ugly" would make more sense
* "The woman is not have rapacity she is have lenience" -- I don't understand what you were trying to say
The man is not handsome he is friendly . The woman is not have rapacity she is have lenience . The boy is not tall he is short . The girl is not old she is young . I am not rich i am poor . You are not bad you are good.
I will draw experience and repair it!!! Right now it better
well done))
i like it! we use a comma to separate the two parts of the sentence.
The man is not handsome, he is friendly . The woman is not greedy, she is lenient . The boy is not tall, he is short. The girl is not, old she is young . I am not rich, i am poor. You are not bad, you are good .
also, re the discussion about rapacity and lenience, in english it would sound better to say the person was or was not rapacious, and was or was not lenient. i don't know whether you realize it or not, but they are not opposites, a person could be lenient and rapacious.
The man is not handsome he is friendly . The woman is not rapacy she is leniece . The boy is not tall he is short . The girl is not old she is young . I am not rich i am poor . You are not bad you are good .
rapacity and lenience
good
The man is not handsome he is ugly. The woman is not greedy she is lenient . The boy is not tall he is short . The girl is not old she is young . I am not rich i am poor . You are not bad you are good .
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The man is not handsome, he is friendly. The woman is not greedy, she is generous. The boy is not tall, he is short. I am not rich, I am poor.
Be sure to use a comma to separate two different thoughts in your sentence and always capatilize "I" when it's a pronoun. Good Job!
Hello Nhan,
You did well with this exercise; the only thing missing are the commas! Great job, however, punctuality is big in english (do not worry, too much; most Americans do not use punctuation, anyway.). Keep trying, your english is almost perfect!
Supergerman