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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 1

Introduce yourself

Instructions: Introduce yourself. Tell us your name, how you are doing, where you are from, where you live, where you work, etc.

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I AM FARZAD FORGHANI.I AM 40 YEARS OLD.I AM AN ENGINEER. I AM FROM IRAN WITH 2500 YEAR CIVILIZATION KINGDOM.AND AT THIS MOMENT I LIVE IN TABRIZ ONE THE MOST CITY IN IRAN THAT IS 600 KM FROM TEHRAN CAPITAL .
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  • caterina
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    I AM FARZAD FORGHANI. I AM 40 YEARS OLD. I AM AN ENGINEER. I AM FROM IRAN WITH a 2500 YEARs' CIVILIZATION KINGDOM.  (Sorry, I do not know how the word Kingdom fits in here.) 

    AND AT THIS MOMENT I LIVE IN TABRIZ, ONE of THE MOST biggest  (?) CITies IN IRAN.  It  IS 600 KM FROM TEHRAN, the CAPITAL.

    GOOD!

    Submitted 7 months ago
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