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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 3

Activities: Today and Yesterday

Instructions: Using the irregular verbs from this lesson, write sentences in the present continuous and past simple tense about six people: a man and a woman, a boy and a girl, you and me. Ex: A man is swimming in the lake now. A man swam in the lake yesterday.

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They served all kind of butties, i like order a cheese and pepsi
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  • Bagladyclaire
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    Hi :)

    Where did you learn 'butties'?! It's not a common word really, it's slang from the North of England :) (But it's still correct - or you would say 'sandwiches'.

    They served all kind of butties, I would like to order a cheese one and a pepsi.

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  • brigtom
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    "Served" is past tense , it would be better : "They serve all kind of butties " in the present tense . " I like ordering cheese and pepsi " - when you usually go there .If you're there at the restaurant you say to the waiter : " I would like to order cheese and pepsi , please "

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  • emmanuel
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    Good attempt

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  • FeFe
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    Hello,Amr!

    let's try again,you are a good student!!!

    thanks,Amr.

    fateha.

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  • Astra418
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    butties?  ... always use a capital letter when you say/write "I"

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  • marjan
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    They served all kind of butties, I like order a cheese and pepsi.

    butties?...

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  • Yuki159
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    Nice;

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