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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 4, Lesson 1

Going on Vacation

Instructions: Describe a vacation you are taking. When and where are you going? What are you going to do?

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In my country there is no vacation for now,Two months have them,I'll go to a place called tilizarao is a space where there are fields and hills is the country of my maternal grandmother, which hare just relax and enjoy time with family.
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  • david
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    Great going..

     

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  • maru!!
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    thanks.

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  • @ Riku
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    Semantic ( meaning of syntax >>  ) ok..Excellent..

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  • maru!!
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    Riku muy amable tu revision,gracias

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  • KISH@KIND
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    In my country,  now there is no vacation . After two months ,I'll go to a place named tilizarao .At this place, there are fields and hills . It is the country of my maternal grandmother, I will go there to  just relax and enjoy time with family.

    EXCELLENT MARU

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  • maru!!
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    KISH KIND gracias

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  • @ Riku
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    gracias..

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  • EDNEI LOPES
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    excelente trabajo....

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  • maru!!
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    mil gracias a cada uno que se tomo el tiempo para dejar su comentario!!

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  • Beatriz
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    Muy bien!
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  • marcelo sar
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    my family: con me familia

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