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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 2

Describe People

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe what six people (a man and a woman, he and she, you and I) are doing at this moment and what they did some time ago. Ex: The woman is opening the door. The woman opened the door an hour ago.

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I usually go to the park with my family or my friends. When I am at the park, I like to play with my nephews and nieces. Sometimes I go jogging there.
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  • Amatullaah
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    السلام عليكم ورحمة الله وبركاته

    Good job!!!

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  • Chris
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    XD

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    beyond any remark!

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  • knowledgeseeker
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    وعليكم السلام ورحمة الله وبركاته

    Thanks :D

     

     

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  • M_Djou
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    Good job!

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  • Weltkunst
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    wonderful job!!

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    Good!

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    That's good.

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  • Imraan
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    great job...just one suggestion: I usually go to the park with my family or my friends (repitive words).

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