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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 201, Unit 7, Lesson 5

Famous Landmarks

Instructions: Where did you go on your last vacation? Did you see any famous landmarks? What other types of interesting sites did you see?

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I was on a vacation in the first part of September. I went by an airplane. I was in Barcelona.
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  • Pauli
    Mochapoints: 9940  |  Teacher Score: 6210 (100%)

    I was on a vacation in the first part of September. I went by an airplane. I was in went to Barcelona.

    "I was in Barcelona" is grammatically correct but "I went to Barcelona" answers the particular question better.

    My last vacation was in the first part of September. I went to Barcelona by airplane.

    Typically we would  say "I flew to Barcelona" and it is understood that it was by plane.

    Submitted over a year ago
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