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Running Errands

Write about a set of errands you have to do. Where do you need to go? When? With who?

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rose
I like buying some foods and some clothes. I like comfort clothes and personality thing.
제출됨: 2008-06-06 12:33:52



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  • 2008-05-30 11:52:18
    Liujiangtian
    You like Rose! Wonderful.
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  • 2008-06-06 12:33:52
    White Eagle
    Rose very good, but here are some corrections. "I like comfort clothes....." it would be better to say.... I like comfortable clothes..... "personality thing." would be better as.... things with personality.
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