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Running Errands
Write about a set of errands you have to do. Where do you need to go? When? With who?
I like buying some foods and some clothes. I like comfort clothes and personality thing.
제출됨: 2008-06-06 12:33:52
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2008-05-30 11:52:18Liujiangtian
You like Rose! Wonderful. -
2008-06-06 12:33:52White Eagle
Rose very good, but here are some corrections. "I like comfort clothes....." it would be better to say.... I like comfortable clothes..... "personality thing." would be better as.... things with personality.
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Running Errands -
I like buying some f...
2 의견란 게재됨:2008-05-29 04:42:27 -
Transportation -
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Transportation -
Maybe I take some mo...
1 의견란 게재됨:2008-05-09 13:42:26 -
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No,I don't.I only us...
게재됨:2008-05-09 12:47:45
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