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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 5, Lesson 2

Running Errands

Instructions: Write about a set of errands you have to do. Where do you need to go? When? With who?

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I like buying some foods and some clothes. I like comfort clothes and personality thing.
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  • Banddy Liu
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  • Banddy Liu
    Mochapoints: 2819  |  Teacher Score: 507
    You like Rose! Wonderful.
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  • 白鷹
    Mochapoints: 3760  |  Teacher Score: 1875 (0%)
    Rose very good, but here are some corrections. "I like comfort clothes....." it would be better to say.... I like comfortable clothes..... "personality thing." would be better as.... things with personality.
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