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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 6

Professions

Instructions: Describe the professions of four people: a woman, a man, you and me. Use both positive and negative sentences. Ex. I am a student. The man is a doctor; he is not a teacher.

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I am a student.
The man is a doctor.
He is not a teacher.
You are a student,too.
The woman is our teacher.
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  • borja710
    Mochapoints: 29671  |  Teacher Score: 23147 (91%)

    ...student, too.

    Very good! Just keep on writing! And read and follow the direction caredully.

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  • -Jᴏɴ-
    Mochapoints: 267320  |  Teacher Score: 260577 (100%)

    Perfect!  You don't need the comma in "You are a student, too", but I think it is OK to have it.

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  • Ramanuj
    Mochapoints: 323  |  Teacher Score: 150

    correct

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