English Writing Exercise Describe the location of your city and country
Instructions:
Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe the locations of your city and country. Which countries are located north, south, east, and west of your country? In which corner of the country is your city located? Describe which cities are located north, south, east, or west of your city.
My name is Murat and I am from Turkey. Because it is an international language and will help me get a job, I want to learn English.
When using short simple sentences, try to combine them by using a conjunction (for, and, nor, but, or, yet, so).
Your second sentence is quite good, but there are some simple mistakes to correct. Instead of using English twice in the sentence use a pronoun in it's place. I'm quite certain that English isn't the only factor to contribute to you getting a good job, but instead it will help you get a new job.
Good work! ;)))
My name ıs Murat. Because Englısh ıs an ınternatıonal language and I need a good job, so I wanna want to learn Englısh. I am from Turkey.
Notes
The first letter of a sentence must begin with a capital letter.
The names of places and people always begin with a capital letter - Murat, English, Turkey, England, Turkish.
Wanna (want to) this is a slang word and would not be used in formal writing or speech - although it is spoken in very informal conversations - ie., with your family or friends