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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 2

Describe People

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe what six people (a man and a woman, he and she, you and I) are doing at this moment and what they did some time ago. Ex: The woman is opening the door. The woman opened the door an hour ago.

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I go to the park every saturday afternoon with my dog. I do long walks, and often I throw the ball and my dog takes me back. Sometimes I go there with a book, and I read for about two hours.
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  • Mala
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    ... often I throw the ball and my dog takes me back brings it back to me.

    Excellent, only one small mistake.  Bravo!!!

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  • Henry Edwards
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    Excellent - I concur with Mala's comment.

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  • zvim
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    I go to the park every sSaturday afternoon with my dog. I do long walks, and often I throw the ball and my dog takes me back brings it back to me. Sometimes I go there with a book, and I read for about two hours.

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    Mochapoints: 3051  |  Teacher Score: 1005 (100%)

    :-) Non sei più "beginner"... E' bello sapere che stai bene, ed anche "L" :-)

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