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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 2

Describe People

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe what six people (a man and a woman, he and she, you and I) are doing at this moment and what they did some time ago. Ex: The woman is opening the door. The woman opened the door an hour ago.

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When I'm at the park i usually play football or other sports with my friends , i dont like just to sit and do nothing.
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  • Stewie
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    don't
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  • alrant
    Mochapoints: 4351  |  Teacher Score: 1564 (94%)

    " I don't like just sitting and doing nothing" is better.
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  • stan611
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    You need a comma after the word "park."

    Always capitalize "I."

    Use a period after "friends" to end your sentence.

    Stan ^_*

    When I'm at the park, I usually play football or other sports with my friends. I dont like just to sit and do nothing.
    Submitted 6 months ago
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