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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 2

Describe People

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe what six people (a man and a woman, he and she, you and I) are doing at this moment and what they did some time ago. Ex: The woman is opening the door. The woman opened the door an hour ago.

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When I go to the park the first thing I look for is a seat where I can read. After some minutes or maybe if the books is interesting after several minutes I start seeing everything with a new perspective for example the birds and I stare at them every mere movement that they do.

Then I stand up and start walking some times I go around the park and others I go away.
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    When I go to the park the first thing I look for is a seat where I can read. After some minutes or maybe if the books is interesting, after several minutes I start seeing everything with a new perspective for example the birds and I stare at them every mere movement that they do. Then I stand up and start walking sometimes I go around the park and others I go away.

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