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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 4

Going Shopping

Instructions: Describe the last time you went shopping. What did you buy? How much did it cost?

Paulo's submission: Average Rating:
The last time I went shopping I bought a gift to a friend. The gift was a DVD of the film "The Circus". It cost 19 cruzeiros, about 10 dollars.
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  • carnivalman
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    Hi Pedro

    Eu posso ver somente um erro:  ......bought a gift for a friend.  "piece of cake" (facil)

    Have a good evening

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  • Bülent
    Mochapoints: 82365  |  Teacher Score: 81454 (99%)

    Very well done (except "for a friend"). Keep it up!
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  • Rene
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    Very good, Paulo. I agree with the previous comments.
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