Describe your day
Instructions:
Using the vocabulary words from the lessons, describe your trip to work or school. How long does it take to get there? How far do you have to go? How much does it cost?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 201, Unit 8, Lesson 3
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I haven't a big family.only father,sıster and me because my mother was died.My father sıxty years old and he is a retıred.My sıster ıs twentythree years old and she is a student.she is younger than me.I'm twentyfive years old.
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I haven't a big family.There is only my father,sıster and me because my mother was died.My father is sıxty years old and he is a retıred.My sıster ıs twenty three years old and she is a student. She is younger than me. I'm twentyfive years old.
Very good - just a couple of very small mistakes. Keep up the good work
I DON'T HAVE A BIG FAMILY.I ONLY HAVE MY FATHER,SISTER AND ME,BECAUSE MY MOTHER DIED.MY FATHER IS SIXTY YEARS OLD AND HE RETIRED FROM WORK,MY SISTER IS 23 YEARS OLD AND A STUDENT,I'M 2 YEARS OLDER THAN HER
ENJOY LEARNING. :)
KEEP IT UP :)
I haven't a big family.There is only my father,sıster and me because my mother died.My father is sıxty years old and he is retıred.My sıster ıs twenty-three years old and she is a student. She is younger than me. I'm twenty-five years old.