Describe Your Home Tools
Instructions:
List some tools that you have at home. What are they? Where did you buy them? How often do you use them? What was the last tool you used and why?
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 202, Unit 10, Lesson 5
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Today is 9 october. In our city otom. It is rainning now. Not very cold, about 10C. If you want to go out, you must to take umbrella. Had and gloves you must to take also. But the forest is not naked. It is gold, red, orange and green. I think that defolation will be soon.
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you must take an umbrella
hat and gloves
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Today is the ninth of October. Its Autumn in our city. It is raining now. It is not very cold, about 10C. If you want to go out, you should take an umbrella with you. Flso you should take a hat and gloves.But the forest is not naked. It is gold, red, orange and green. I think, it will be defolation soon.
Today is 9th of Ooctober. It's Autum in our city.In our city otom. It is rainning now. It's nNot very cold, about 10C. If you want to go out, you have / shouldmust to take an umbrella. Also you should take a hat and gloves.Had and gloves you must to take also. But the forest is not naked. It is gold, red, orange and green. I think we're close to defoliating.I think it's close to defolation will be soon.
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Today is 9 October. In our city - Otom - it is rainning now. It is not very cold, about 10C. If you want to go out, you should to take umbrella. You should also to take a hat and gloves. The trees are still in leaf. They are gold, red, orange and green. I think that they will be falling soon.
The grammar is correct for the last three sentences. However, forests might be described as naked when being poetic, but the opposite, not naked, sounds odd. Defoliation is better used for the loss of leaves from a diseased tree, rather than the annual dropping of leaves in autumn.
can, could, must, should+to
had hat
9-th of October
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