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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 2

Describing People

Instructions: Describe six different people, using a positive and negative descriptive word: a woman, a man, a boy, a girl, you and me. Ex. The boy is young and not tall.

emraan.jaleel's submission: Average Rating:
The man is not tall.The man is short.The woman is not badl.The woman is beautiful. The boy is not short.The boy is tall.The girls is not poor.She is rich.
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  • Sophie
    Mochapoints: 549  |  Teacher Score: 288 (0%)

    You're off to a good start! Just remember to put a space between the period "." at the end of a sentence and the first word in the new sentence.

    I think you may have had one accidental spelling error. Instead of "badl" I think you meant "bald"?

    Anyhow, great job and keep practicing!

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  • Angie27
    Mochapoints: 63574  |  Teacher Score: 51229 (100%)

     Good but you didn't describe you and me. Just 2 tiny errors. "badl" and "girls" when you mean girl.

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