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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 4, Lesson 5

Morning Routine

Instructions: Describe your morning routine. Do you drink coffee? Take your car to get gas? Watch TV?

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I wake up early about at six o'clok in the mornig, first have a shower then I'm ready to drink a cup of cofee with a dash of milk. Before to start at work have a time to read (very fast) the newspeaper with another cup of espresso cofee.
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  • michelle
    Mochapoints: 23759  |  Teacher Score: 23027 (100%)

    Hi David,

    You are doing well, a few sugguestions below.

    Michelle

    I wake up early, about at six o'clock o'clok in the mornig.  First first  I take my have a shower then I'm ready to drink a cup of coffee  cofee with a dash of milk. Before to start at work, I have just enough a time to quickly read (very fast) the newspeaper with another cup of espresso coffee cofee.

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  • Ruta
    Mochapoints: 2275  |  Teacher Score: 298 (0%)

    Well done! I agree with Michelle. Her correction is perfect.

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  • zvim
    Mochapoints: 2402  |  Teacher Score: 1081 (0%)

    I wake up early about at at about six o'clok in the mornig,. First I have a shower then I'm get myself ready to drink a cup of cofee with a dash of milk. Before to I start at work I spare a short time have a time to quickly read (very fast) the newspeaper with another cup of espresso coffee.

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  • Candieonline
    Mochapoints: 3362  |  Teacher Score: 745 (100%)

    The 1st sentance was perfect !

    Sentance 2 , needs work !

    ''Before to start at work " 

    Should be - " Before I go to work"

    "have a time to read(very fast) the newspaper "                

    Should be - "I have the time to quickly read the newspaper with another cup of espresso coffee."

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