English Writing Exercise
Morning Routine
Describe your morning routine. Do you drink coffee? Take your car to get gas? Watch TV?
I wake up early about at six o'clok in the mornig, first have a shower then I'm ready to drink a cup of cofee with a dash of milk. Before to start at work have a time to read (very fast) the newspeaper with another cup of espresso cofee.
Submitted: 2009-10-20 00:21:47
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Hi David,
You are doing well, a few sugguestions below.
Michelle
I wake up early, about at six o'clock o'clok in the mornig. First first I take my have a shower then I'm ready to drink a cup of coffee cofee with a dash of milk. Before I to start at work, I have just enough a time to quickly read (very fast) the newspeaper with another cup of espresso coffee cofee.
Well done! I agree with Michelle. Her correction is perfect.
I wake up early about at at about six o'clok in the mornig,. First I have a shower then I'm get myself ready to drink a cup of cofee with a dash of milk. Before to I start at work I spare a short time have a time to quickly read (very fast) the newspeaper with another cup of espresso coffee.
The 1st sentance was perfect !
Sentance 2 , needs work !
''Before to start at work "
Should be - " Before I go to work"
"have a time to read(very fast) the newspaper "
Should be - "I have the time to quickly read the newspaper with another cup of espresso coffee."