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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 201, Unit 7, Lesson 5

Famous Landmarks

Instructions: Where did you go on your last vacation? Did you see any famous landmarks? What other types of interesting sites did you see?

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The last time I went on a vacation was last january. I went by car to a famous seabord city called Parati.
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  • Taylor Pridgen
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    I'm not sure what you mean by Seabord. 

    Possibly you mean a seaside city?
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  • nravo
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    Very well done, January should be capitalized, and "seabord" should be spelled seaboard.
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  • melhoréBossa
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    The last time I went on a vacation was last January. I went by car to a famous seasidebord city called Parati.
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  • carnivalman
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    January Carnivalman
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