Describing Hairstyles
Instructions:
Using both positive and negative characteristics, describe the hairstyles of six people: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and me. EX. The young girl does not have short hair. She has long hair.
English Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 101, Unit 2, Lesson 4
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The girl has blond hair. She does not have curly hair.
The man does not hair becouse he is bald.
The woman has straight brown hair. She isn't curly.
The boy has long blond hair. He isn't bald.
the old man has a white beard, he doesn't have moustache
I have short blond hair and i have no beard
The man does not hair becouse he is bald.
The woman has straight brown hair. She isn't curly.
The boy has long blond hair. He isn't bald.
the old man has a white beard, he doesn't have moustache
I have short blond hair and i have no beard
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The girl has blonde hair. She does not have curly hair. The man does not have hair because he is bald. The woman has straight brown hair. Her hair isn't curly. The boy has long blonde hair. He isn't bald. The old man has a white beard, he doesn't have a moustache. I have short blond hair and I have no beard.
..blonde..
the man does not have..
..because he is bald.
The old man..
..have a moustache.
..it isn't curly..
The girl has blonde hair. She does not have curly hair. The man does not have hair because he is bald. The woman has straight brown hair. She does not have curly hair. The boy has long blonde hair. He isn't bald. The old man has a white beard, he doesn't have moustache. I have short blonde hair and I do not have a beard.
nice work!!! I agree with the other friend's corrections.
The girl has blonde_ hair. She {does not = doesn't (parlato)} have curly hair.
The man {has no = does not _have [any]} hair, _so either he is bald, or he has had it cut off.
(The man has no hair, not _because he is bald, but because_ he has had it cut off.)
The woman has straight brown hair. _Hers isn't curly.
The boy has long _fair hair. He isn't bald.
_The old man has a white beard, he {doesn't have a = has no} moustache.
I have short {fair / blonde} hair and I (sempre maiuscola, non iv+ii=vi) {haven't a = have no} beard.
(She is {[a] blonde # [a] brunette # red-haired} (oggi ;-). He is {fair-haired # dark-haired # red-haired}.)