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English Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 201, Unit 7, Lesson 3

Needs and Wants

Instructions: Compare “need” and “want” in sentences about six people: you and me, a boy and a girl, a man and a woman. Also, use positives and negatives of either “need” or “want” in some of the sentences. Example: I want a car, but I need to finish my college degree. She wants ice cream; she does not want broccoli.

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you need to go down stairs, turn left on the first across, then, go straight and you will find a bus station. you need to take a bus in the bus station. The driver will tell you where to stop when you arrive. Good luck.
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  • Apple
    Mochapoints: 55565  |  Teacher Score: 48135 (100%)

    You need to go down the stairs, turn left at the first across intersection. Then,  just go straight and you will find a bus station. You will need to take a bus at  the bus station. The driver will tell you where to get off the bus  when you arrive. Good luck.

    Hi Zhu

    Good work. These are good directions. Just some changes that you need to make.

    cheers

    Apple
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  • Junior Zhu
    Mochapoints: 768  |  Teacher Score: 25 (0%)

    yeah
    Submitted over a year ago
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