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Spanish Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 201, Unit 7, Lesson 5

Famous Landmarks

Instructions: Where did you go on your last vacation? Did you see any famous landmarks? What other types of interesting sites did you see?

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La ultima vez yo fue a un vaccacoin era el verano pasado. Fui a Irlanda con mi familia en un avion. Era para una semana.
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  • raquel887
    Mochapoints: 633  |  Teacher Score: 296 (0%)

    The verb "ir," when conjugated in first person preterite, is "fui."

    "Vacation" is spelled "vacaciones."

    Good job! :)

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  • Daniel
    Mochapoints: 1887  |  Teacher Score: 663 (81%)

    La ultima vez que me fui de vacaciones fue en el verano pasado.... Era por una semana.

    Buen trabajo Emma.

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  • satori036
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    Hola:

    La última vez que fuí a vacaciones fué el verano pasado a un vaccacoin era el verano pasado. Fuí a Irlanda con mi familia en un avión. Fué una semana. :)

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  • Herr Direktor
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    Hi Emma, you can eliminate de article in the second sentence. "Fuí a Irlanda con mi Familia en avión". Without "un".

    Era "por" una semana.

    Keep studying ;)

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  • Achtung Baby
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    "La última vez que fuí de vacaciones fue el verano pasado. Fui a Irlanda con mi familia en avión. El viaje duró una semana."

    Some notes: In spanish the verb include the subject; in this case "I". "la última vez que yo fuí". Is not bad but is better without "yo". The verb must be "fuí" because is past simple (last year). About the word "vacaciones": As well as in english "holidays", it couldn´t be one holidays or a lot of holidays in this case because you are talking about general action of going holidays so you must delete "a un". The correct form is "irse de vacaciones" (in this case: "fuí de vacaciones").

    Also you must delete "un" before "avión" as well as in english "by plane" "en avión"

    I hope this comments are usefull for you and sorry if i have a lot of mistakes with my english... 

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  • Steven
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    la última vez que estuve de vacaciones fue en el verano pasado, fui en avión a irlanda con mi familia, estuvimos una semana.

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