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Spanish Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 4

Going Shopping

Instructions: Describe the last time you went shopping. What did you buy? How much did it cost?

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La última vez que salí de compras, no compré mucho. Simplemente me compré un galón de leche que costó USD $1.99 (pura Vitamina D que me agrada bastante). Tambíen compré una libra de harina por USD $2.99 más o menos y mantequilla por $0.99--todo para hacer panqueques para desayuno.
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  • Manuel
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    Muy bien. Felicitaciones!!!

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  • Stein
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    Hey there, pretty good!

    Just 2 little mistakes.

    About milk, I'm not sure in what countainers you can find milk in the US. In Peru, for example, you can find milk in cans (latas)and boxes (cajas)

    La última vez que (fui)salí de compras, no compré mucho. Simplemente me compré un galón de leche que costó USD $1.99 (pura Vitamina D que me agrada bastante). Tambn compré una libra de harina por USD $2.99 más o menos y mantequilla por $0.99--todo para hacer panqueques para el desayuno.

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  • Alejandro
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    Hi!

    It's all great, your spanish is top notch.

    I would just recommend saying para el desayuno instead of para desayuno.

    Without el it could also be para desayunar.

    Just that, it's very nice to see how you placed all the accents correctly.

     

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  • Ademar de Barro...
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    La última vez que salí para hacer compras, no compré mucho. Simplemente me compré una caja de leche que costó USD $1.99 (pura Vitamina D que me agrada bastante). Tambn compré una libra de harina por USD $2.99 más o menos y mantequilla por $0.99--todo para hacer panqueques para el desayuno.

    Hi Ian, it's good. You made a beautiful composition, congratulations

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  • Sheila Mendes
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    Muy bien!!!!!!!!!!

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  • Carlos
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    Muy bien.

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