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Farsi Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 6

Professions

Instructions: Describe the professions of four people: a woman, a man, you and me. Use both positive and negative sentences. Ex. I am a student. The man is a doctor; he is not a teacher.

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او یک آموزگار است. من یک مدیر هستم. او یک پزشک است، این زن پرستار است. آن مرد تعمیرکار است. این زن سرآشپز خوبی است. تو راننده اتوبوس هستی و من دانشجوی پزشکی هستم. آن مرد پزشک نیست. آن زن پرستار نیست، او آشپز است. او معلم نیست، دانش آموز کلاس چهارم است
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  • Sani
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    Well done!

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  • aram
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    great keep improving...^_^

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  • leila
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    Bravooo...mon ami.

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  • copoly
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    او دانش آموز کلاس  چهارم است درست است.

    u r good but u should compleilt your sentencse

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  • abbas
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    ok,

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  • Anahid
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    well done

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  • Marcel
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    copoly

    ممنون از نظرتان

    .او معلم نیست، دانش آموز کلاس چهارم است

    در حقیقت «او» بار دوم به «قرینه» حذف شده است که درست است

    .به اضافه اینکه جمله باید «ایجاز» داشته باشد

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  • hooshang.soltan...
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    u  have  to  say  that:in    or  an     daneshamoz.

                                                                                  ااین

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  • hooshang.soltan...
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    این دانش آ موز کلاس چها رم است.

    ان دانش آ مو ز کلاس چها رم است.

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  • Marcel
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    .او معلم نیست، دانش آموز ِ کلاس  ِ چهارم است

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  • ladan
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    kheli khobe.

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  • sultana سلطانه
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    Excellent!

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    good

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  • Langue
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    ok

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  • Anna
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    ziba neveshti

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  • Nikou
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    Hey buddy,

    It is a greeeaaat Job! How long it is that you are practicing? You have really mastered pronouns and conjugating.

    Good luck

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  • shahnaz kakvan
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    Your Farsi is very good.Great!! I think, I need to learn English From you.

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  • hamide
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    You should teach Farsi not learning it.

    Bravooooooooooooo

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  • hansenjay22
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    good job

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