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French Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 6, Lesson 2

Giving and Receiving

Instructions: Describe a present you have received. What was it? Who did you get it from? Is there something you gave in return?

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J'habite au Brésil. Je ne suis allé à aucun autre pays encore, mais je visiterai beaucoup de pays bientôt. Je veux visiter l'Italie, l'Angleterre, les Etats-Unis, les FRANÇAIS, le Japon, le Mexique, le Portugal et l'Egypte.
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  • Fabrizio
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  • Fabrizio
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    Très bien. Seulement quelques petites choses. "Je ne suis allé" -> "Je ne suis pas allé" ou "Je ne suis jamais allé" "les français" -> "la France".
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  • djonatha
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    fuc***g phrase translator!! heheehe thank you, fabrizio!! see you!!
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  • Genevieve-Anne
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  • Genevieve-Anne
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    Eh! Johnny wait a minute! You were right.... since you had a negation word in your sentence which is "aucun". Because if I look in my dictionary "aucun" means "pas un". It is also said that "aucun" is used with "ne". The example given in the dictionary: "Aucun ne travaille". But the other user was right to say that the country's name is "la France".
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  • Fabrizio
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    Oui, Genevieve a raison.
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  • Erik.
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    Tout d’abord, bon travail et bien écrit ! Comme les autres utilisateurs vous ont déjà fait des commentaires qui me semblent fort utiles, je vous encouragerai seulement de continuer à l’écrit tout en faisant attention d’améliorer votre niveau de vocabulaire, grammaire ; en respectant les règles françaises de ponctuation, majuscules, et orthographe ; et enfin, en approfondissant vos réflexions sur le sujet abordé. Je vous souhaite une bonne continuation et courage pour la suite !
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  • Crístian Deives
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    o nome do país é "la France".
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