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French Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 4, Lesson 1

Going on Vacation

Instructions: Describe a vacation you are taking. When and where are you going? What are you going to do?

mohammed's submission: Average Rating:
chars amis,
je suis en vacance dans les aples
Il fait froid , la montagen est magnifique!
je suis dans un petit hotel sympa
j'dore cet endroit
je vous telephone a mon
je vous embrasse
Submitted over a year ago

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  • rasha
    Mochapoints: 1440  |  Teacher Score: 1027 (0%)
    i am just start french course so i can't correct your's sorry
    Submitted over a year ago
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  • selsebil
    Mochapoints: 4111  |  Teacher Score: 768

    chèrs amis , je suis en vacance dans les Alpes il la montagne est magnifique, je suis dan un petit hotel sympa je suis dans un petit hotel sympa j'adore cet endroit je vous applerais

     je vous embrasse

    Submitted over a year ago
  • keNz@
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    Hi ! you did a very nice job. those are some notes :

    Chèrs amis, je suis en vacance dans les ALPES. Il fait froid , la montagne est magnifique! je suis dans un petit hotel sympa , j'adore cet endroit . Je vous applerais et je vous embrasse.

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