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French Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 5

Describing Objects

Instructions: Describe the objects you learned about in this lesson. Use both positive and negative characteristics to explain what they are like. Ex. There are five buildings. Two buildings are green. Three buildings are not green. They are black.

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Sono un ingenere in informatica. Quando ero un bambino, io voluto essere un’insegnante.
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  • Pierfrancesco
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  • Pierfrancesco
    Mochapoints: 466  |  Teacher Score: 80 (0%)
    Sono un ingegnere in informatica. Quando ero un bambino, io volevo (imperfetto the action is generally old so you can't use present perfect ho voluto) essere un insegnante (without apostrophe)
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  • Tommaso
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  • Tommaso
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    Usually we say "ingegnere informatico", but it's correct also the way you wrote it. Remember that "imperfetto" is used to describe continuous actions in the past(like the action of wanting to become something or someone), while "passato prossimo"(ho voluto) it's used to describe instant actions in the past. Further "passato remoto" is rarely used in spoken Italian(so even if you want to talk about something happened years ago, usually you would use "avevo" rather than "ebbi": da bambino avevo un gatto\da bambino ebbi un gatto). Anyway you're doing very well. I hope my French could be the same :-)
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  • Anna
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  • Anna
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    sono un ingegnere informatico. Quando ero bambino volevo fare l'insegnante.
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