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French Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 3, Lesson 2

Describing household objects.

Instructions: Describe the objects in three rooms of a house. EX. The rug is in the hallway. A mirror is outside the closet. The kitchen sink is in the kitchen.

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La voiture blanche est dans le garage. Le mur est brun. Les escaliers sont prés du placard dans le salon. Dans l'évier sont énormément des roui.
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  • ǝǝƃʎʞıɯ
    Mochapoints: 23117  |  Teacher Score: 10406 (99%)

    La voiture blanche est dans le garage. Le mur est brun. Les escaliers sont préès du placard dans le salon. Dans l'évier sont énormément des roui (???).

    Qu'est-ce que les roui ? Mieux vaut que je ne l'écrive pas en russe !

    Il faudrait utiliser l'une des formes:

    - Il y a énormément de xxxx dans l'évier

    - Dans l'évier se trouvent énormément de xxxx

    Sinon c'est bien ! Continue
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  • sviven
    Mochapoints: 13394  |  Teacher Score: 4534 (100%)

    The previous corrections are good. I would only add that "brun" is used more to describe hair colour. If you're describing objects, it's better to say "marron".

    In general it's not bad!
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