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French Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 4

Going Shopping

Instructions: Describe the last time you went shopping. What did you buy? How much did it cost?

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Je suis allée au centre commercial tout les jours, parce que le bureau où je travaille est en face de un grand centre commercial à São Paulo. J’ai acheté là bas tout les cadeaux pour Noël.
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  • fabou
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    Je suis allée au centre commercial tous les jours, parce que le bureau où je travaille est en face d'un grand centre commercial à São Paulo. Là bas , j'y ai acheté tous les cadeaux pour Noël.

     

    Você pode escriver tambem  : tous les jours, comme mon bureau est en face de ....

    Beijão

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  • RoMeRo
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    Eu não acho muito mais nada para adicionarr depois das dicas da " fabou". ("tout" masc. sing/ "toute" fem.sing/ "tous" masc. plur./ "toutes" fem. plur./ " y" = ali, em aquel lugar). Bom travalho.

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  • Luc Minot
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    Même correction que Fabou, que je salue.

    Voici un audio.

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  • Samantha
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    Même commentaire que fabou.

    Bravo!! Continue!!

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  • mobail
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    Voir corrections de Fabou.

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  • Florent
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    Je suis allée au centre commercial tous les jours, parce que le bureau où je travaille est en face d'un grand centre commercial à São Paulo. J'ai acheté là-bas tous les cadeaux pour Noël.

     

    là-bas...trait d'union! sinon voir Fabou! :)

     

     

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  • el_baz
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    le bureau où je travaille est en face de un d'un grand centre commercial à São Paulo. J’ai acheté là bas touts les cadeaux pour Noël.

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