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French Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 201, Unit 7, Lesson 4

My Country

Instructions: Please introduce the country in which you live. What country would you like to visit on your next trip? Which country did you visit on your last trip?

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Je suis Brésilien et je vis au Brésil. Bien que je n'ai Voyage pas à n'importe quel autre pays, mais je veux visiter la France.
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  • Hawa
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    bien mais juste un petit probleme de placement des mots.

    "bien que je n'ai pas voyagea n'importe quel autres pays"

    felicitation et peut mieux faire.

     
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  • mayline974
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    Je suis Brésilien et je vis au Brésil. Bien que je n'ai Voyage pas à n'importe quel autre pays, mais je veux jamais voyagé dans d'autre pays, j'aimerai visiter la France.

     

    *Because you use "bien que" you don't need to use "mais" it sounds like a repetition

    * "n'importe quel autre" means "any other one" i think it is clearer if you just say "never travel in another country"="jamais voyagé dans un autre pays"

    Welcome you in France^^
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