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French Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 6, Lesson 2

Giving and Receiving

Instructions: Describe a present you have received. What was it? Who did you get it from? Is there something you gave in return?

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J'ai reçu un très joli cadeau hier soir. Ma copain m'a donné la savon perfumé. J'ai été supris, Il n'etait pas mon anniversaire. A mon avis elle est tres gentil.

J'ai commence mes achetes pour les cadeaux de noel déjà. Pour mon fils j'ai acheté une montre et poour mon fille une livre. J'espere ils aiment leur.
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  • naonao
    Mochapoints: 23256  |  Teacher Score: 16696
    Pas mal! Quelques corrections: MA COPINE (s'il s'agit d'un homme, on dit: MON COPAIN) ... pArfumé. J'ai été suprisE, CE n'était pas mon anniversaire. A mon avis elle est très gentilLE. J'ai déjà commencé A FAIRE LES ACHATS pour les cadeaux de NOËL. P... et pour ma fille un livre. J'espère QU'ils VONT aimeR. Bon courage. Nao.
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  • kooka
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    J'ai reçu un très joli cadeau hier soir. Mon copain m'a donné un savon parfumé. J'ai été surprise, ce n'était pas mon anniversaire. A mon avis il est très gentil. J'ai déjà commencé à acheter les cadeaux de Noël . Pour mon fils j'ai acheté une montre et pour ma fille un livre. J'espere qu'ils aimeront.
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  • hop
    Mochapoints: 8670  |  Teacher Score: 7191 (0%)
    I am ok with other corrections, just a problem, If your friend is a girl... ma copine, if he is a guy, mon copain.... but with ma... it is copine. I think she is a girl. Some small mistakes... Keep it doing...
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  • hop
    Mochapoints: 8670  |  Teacher Score: 7191 (0%)
    I am ok with other corrections, just a problem, If your friend is a girl... ma copine, if he is a guy, mon copain.... but with ma... it is copine. I think she is a girl. Some small mistakes... Keep it doing...
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  • hop
    Mochapoints: 8670  |  Teacher Score: 7191 (0%)
    I am ok with other corrections, just a problem, If your friend is a girl... ma copine, if he is a guy, mon copain.... but with ma... it is copine. I think she is a girl. Some small mistakes... Keep it doing...
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  • hop
    Mochapoints: 8670  |  Teacher Score: 7191 (0%)
    I am ok with other corrections, just a problem, If your friend is a girl... ma copine, if he is a guy, mon copain.... but with ma... it is copine. I think she is a girl. Some small mistakes... Keep it doing...
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  • hop
    Mochapoints: 8670  |  Teacher Score: 7191 (0%)
    I am ok with other corrections, just a problem, If your friend is a girl... ma copine, if he is a guy, mon copain.... but with ma... it is copine. I think she is a girl. Some small mistakes... Keep it doing...
    Submitted over a year ago
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  • hop
    Mochapoints: 8670  |  Teacher Score: 7191 (0%)
    I am ok with other corrections, just a problem, If your friend is a girl... ma copine, if he is a guy, mon copain.... but with ma... it is copine. I think she is a girl. Some small mistakes... Keep it doing...
    Submitted over a year ago
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  • hop
    Mochapoints: 8670  |  Teacher Score: 7191 (0%)
    I am ok with other corrections, just a problem, If your friend is a girl... ma copine, if he is a guy, mon copain.... but with ma... it is copine. I think she is a girl. Some small mistakes... Keep it doing...
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