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French Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 3, Lesson 1

What are people going to do?

Instructions: Using both positive and negative characteristics, describe what six people are going to do and what they are doing: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and me. Ex. The man is going to buy a car. The woman is not buying flowers.

Lucas França's submission: Average Rating:
L'homme boit de l'eau. La femme va acheter la voiture. La fille joue. Le garçon ne dort pas. Tu mange de la nouriture. Je vais lire le livre.
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  • Genevieve-Anne
    Mochapoints: 880906  |  Teacher Score: 862222 (100%)

    Your exercise is incomplete...  You had to write what SIX people are going to do AND what they are doing.  Also you had to write negative sentences.

    For example:

    "L'homme boit de l'eau.  Il ne va pas manger."

    or:

    "La fille joue.  Elle ne va pas chanter."

    Only one little mistake in your exercise:

    "Tu mangeS de la nourriture"

    It is not necessary to write "de la nourriture".  Let's hope this is what you, he or she usually eats  :)

    JOYEUX NOEL  :)

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  • patlyon
    Mochapoints: 7605  |  Teacher Score: 2210 (100%)

    Hi

    -tu manges ( pense à ajouter un "s" quand tu congugues le verbe avec TU)

     

    Merry Chritmas

    Patrick

     

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  • garilambert
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    *Tu manges

    tres bien ;)

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  • Olivier69
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    Almost perfect: ...Tu manges...!

    Olivier

     

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