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French Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 3, Lesson 2

Describing household objects.

Instructions: Describe the objects in three rooms of a house. EX. The rug is in the hallway. A mirror is outside the closet. The kitchen sink is in the kitchen.

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La bougie et les fleurs sont sur la table. La monteau est dans le placard. La télévsion et le lit son dans la chambre. La toilette et dans la salle de bains.
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  • ahtapot
    Mochapoints: 41560  |  Teacher Score: 25223 (0%)

    With that meaning, "toilettes" is always used in the plural (I know, Iknow... That's one of LiveMocha's many mistakes!)

    La bougie et les fleurs sont sur la table. Le manteau est dans le placard. La télévision et le lit sont dans la chambre. Les toilettes sont dans la salle de bains.

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  • lumitiikeri
    Mochapoints: 22358  |  Teacher Score: 4704 (92%)

    Very nicely done. :P There are only a few minor errors (wouldn't be noticable in spoken French really).

     

    - ... et le lit sont dans la chambre.  --> the T at the end of "sont" was missing.

     

    - La toilette est dans la salle de bain. --> the S in "est" was left out (et = and while est = is).

     

    I'm sorry in advance... I'm not going to be able to listen to any spoken submissions until I figure out what's wrong with my computer's speakers...-____-. Unfortunately, something's happened in the two days of me being gone that has altered their brilliance. xD Nonetheless, I'll surely help you out soon as possible.

     

    Mikhail

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