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French Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 5

Your last vacation

Instructions: Describe your last vacation. Where did you most recently visit on holiday? What activities and attractions can you recommend to other travelers?

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Describe your dream vacation:

Je voudrais aller au le Quartier Latin à Paris. Il y a beaucoup des cafés, des librairies et il est le centre des étudiants de Paris. Après, je voudrais aller à la place où je peux lire ou feuilleter des éditions rares. Pourriez-vous me dire où se trouve cette place-ci ?
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  • butterfly12
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    Je voudrais aller au  le (au = à + le)Quartier Latin à Paris. Il y a beaucoup des de cafés, des librairies et il  c'est le centre des étudiants de Paris. Après, je voudrais aller à la place où je peux lire ou feuilleter des éditions rares. Pourriez-vous me dire où se trouve cette place-ci ?
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  • Sebastien Picar...
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    In addition to the previous correction I'd like to point out the following:

    Instead of "Il est le centre des étudiants de Paris " I'd much rather say: C'est le centre de la vie étudiante parisienne.

    Additionally you use "Ce" for a place, never "il" or "elle" 

    "La place" = "the plaza" but I guess you meant the place in that case you wanna use "l'endroit" but when it comes to books it's better to use "librairie" or "bibliothèque"... you're not gonna found rare books in a supermarket 
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  • César
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    Salut, Ivette: Bonne continuation!
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