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French Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 1, Lesson 1

Introduce yourself

Instructions: Introduce yourself. Tell us your name, how you are doing, where you are from, where you live, where you work, etc.

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Mon ami s'appelle Jared. Il est en train d'apprendre allemagne avec Livemocha. Il est grand et tres gentil.
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  • Erik.
    Mochapoints: 131036  |  Teacher Score: 122678 (100%)
    Bravo, cet exercice est bien écrit ! Je me permets de vous suggérer quelques autres changements pour perfectionner votre écriture : (1) Actuellement, il apprend l'allemand : rappelez-vous qu'en français le présent indicatif veut dire soit "he learns," soit "he is learning." Je vous souhaite une bonne continuation et courage pour la suite !
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  • Prof Renato
    Mochapoints: 2309  |  Teacher Score: 618 (85%)
    allemange = Germany allemand = German très
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  • fabio
    Mochapoints: 106  |  Teacher Score:(0%)
    hello nice to miltho....
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  • john
    Mochapoints: 33  |  Teacher Score: 25 (0%)
    my friend name's Michel.He is a man and he is in holiday to the village .He is a student so he is poor and young.He is very gently and he is beautifull.
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  • francisco tarci...
    Mochapoints: 489  |  Teacher Score: 92 (0%)
    Chere amie, Ton français est bien. Je pese qu´Il y a eu une seule faute: allemagne, c´est le pays, et lá allemnd, cé st le correcte pour "d´apprendre allemand et non allemagne. OK? Feel free! Votre ami brésilien, tleite (tarciso leite)
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  • tono
    Mochapoints: 651  |  Teacher Score: 15 (0%)
    Tres bien pour moi
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  • winx
    Mochapoints: 3057  |  Teacher Score: 309 (0%)

    très bies!

    bravo! exellent travaill

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  • mimi
    Mochapoints: 802  |  Teacher Score: 108 (0%)

    i wish i understand what you have written my friend. am so happy i joined livemoncha. i hope to be better than you some day.

    Submitted over a year ago
  • aml
    Mochapoints: 1908  |  Teacher Score: 406 (0%)

    good lock

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  • Ranjani
    Mochapoints: 157  |  Teacher Score: 42 (0%)

    Une femme dans la rue est veille et blonde. L'homme au bureau est grand et rigid. Le petit garcon dans l'ecole  est tres rapide et il est sale. La fille a la supermarche est jeune et belle. Vous etes grande et tres confidante. Moi, je suis etudiante et Indianne. Je reve etudier francaise bien.

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  • Katy
    Mochapoints: 6403  |  Teacher Score: 562 (0%)

    bien

    Submitted over a year ago
  • lefki
    Mochapoints: 149  |  Teacher Score:(0%)

    Mon ami s'appelle Lucie. Elle est anglaise et elle est belle.

     

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  • carlos
    Mochapoints: 111  |  Teacher Score:(0%)

    não sei como atuar neste negocio, isto é estou perdido não por onde começar me ajude.

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  • Abdul Zahir
    Mochapoints: 140  |  Teacher Score: 40 (0%)

    the women talk a lot and they are hearing less.

    a man wanted to make a market in town, a boy alwayse make lie to his father, a girl didn't wash her borther cluth,

    thank,

    Abdul Zahir,

    Submitted over a year ago
  • snyatmaz
    Mochapoints: 193  |  Teacher Score:(0%)

    Hallo

    Submitted over a year ago
  • Lupita Mueller
    Mochapoints: 21125  |  Teacher Score: 6173 (97%)

    Congratulations.

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