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French Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 201, Unit 8, Lesson 4

Describe an area in your city

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe a busy street in your city. What kind of buildings and businesses are located on this street? Where are they located?

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Je suis un homme et j'ai soixante-trois ans. Mes cheveux est brun, mais maintenant je n'ai pas beaucoup d'il. Mes yuex sont aussi brun. Je n'ai pas de moustache ou la barbe.
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  • carmen.vivas
    Mochapoints: 111  |  Teacher Score: 11 (0%)

    Bon jour, mmzz!  Ca va?  I'm Carmen Vivas and I'm a call center foundation skills trainer in Manila.  I'd like to learn Spanish and French.  I noted you're in Oxford; do you teach?  My email address is carmen.vivas@yahoo.com.ph.  I'm with Stellar and we have an office in Scotland.  Happy weekend! 

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  • carmen.vivas
    Mochapoints: 111  |  Teacher Score: 11 (0%)

    Je suis une femme -- 48 ans.  Cheveux, brun; yuex brun. :-)

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  • Antonio Suisse
    Mochapoints: 2095  |  Teacher Score: 1198 (0%)

    Mes cheveux sont bruns. = masculin, pluriel.

    mais maintenant je n'en ai pas beaucoup( plus correct que la suivante)

    ou, je n'ai pas beaucoup de cheveux(répétitif)

    Mes yeux sont aussi bruns(yeux = pluriel)

    Je n'ai pas de moustache ni de barbe.

    Bravo!

     

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