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German Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 5, Lesson 3

Weekly Routines

Instructions: What are your weekly routines? Are there things you do every day? Every week? Every other week? How often?

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Ich liest Buch jedem tag. Ich sieht immer Tokio Hotel videos und hörst ihr gute Musik. Ich esst selten Schokoladen. Ich schläft fast nie gut weil auf einige Problemen.
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  • Metalrocks
    Mochapoints: 1699  |  Teacher Score: 527 (0%)

    Ich lese das Buch jeden Tag. Ich schau mir immer Tokio Videos an und höre mir gute Musik an. Ich esse selten Schokolade. Ich schlafe fast nie weil ich Probleme habe.

    to be honest, i was not sure about the last sentence what you ment. as you can see, the gramma was wrong and some spelling mistakes. but it was understandbale what you ment, besides with the last one. unless i got it right.

    the timing was wrong like past and present tense.

    lesen is the general wrod for reading. "las" is past tense, "lese" is present, "les" is future tense.

    ich las das buch. ( i read the book)

    ich lese das buch. (i am reading the book)

    ich werde das buch lesen. (i will read the book)

     

    hope i could help abit.

    Submitted over a year ago
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  • DiD
    Mochapoints: 157335  |  Teacher Score: 146258 (100%)

    Ich lese jeden Tag ein Buch. iest Buch jedem tag. Ich sehe mir ieht immer Tokio Hotel Videos an und höre st ihre gute Musik . Ich ess selten Schokolade n. Ich schlafe t fast nie gut, weil ich auf einige Probleme n habe.

    Du must meditieren! Das hilft!!

    Submitted over a year ago
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  • Pat
    Mochapoints: 5249  |  Teacher Score: 762 (0%)

    Thanks for helping me guys :)

    Submitted over a year ago

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