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German Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 2, Lesson 4

Describing Hairstyles

Instructions: Using both positive and negative characteristics, describe the hairstyles of six people: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and me. EX. The young girl does not have short hair. She has long hair.

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Der Mann der liest ein Buch hat einen schwarzen Bart und kurze lockige Haare. Eine Frau sitzt bei ihm. Sie hat lange rote Haare.

Ich habe keine roten Haare. Ich habe keine lockigen Haare. Ich habe glatte schwarze Haare.

Der Politzist hat eine Glatze und einen roten Schnurrbart.
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  • flori
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    super!
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  • Teacher Man
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    Der Mann, der  ein Buchliest,  hat einen schwarzen Bart und kurze lockige Haare. Eine Frau sitzt neben ihm. Sie hat lange rote Haare. Ich habe keine roten Haare. Ich habe keine lockigen Haare. Ich habe glatte schwarze Haare. Der Politzist hat eine Glatze und einen roten Schnurrbart.
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  • Sophia09
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    Sehr gut. You put the words in the wrong order in the subordinate clause of the first sentence, and there's only one spelling mistake:

    "Der Mann, der ein Buch liest, hat einen schwarzen Bart..." ;  "Polizist"
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  • Jonathan
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    Hervorragend!

    I can find no errors whatsoever other than "Polizist", although I would write the first sentence as "Der Mann, der ein Buch liest, hat..." I am not certain whether your version is incorrect or simply different; you would have to ask a native speaker.

    Wirklich gut gemacht!
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