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German Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 4, Lesson 3

Describing the weather

Instructions: Describe the weather for five days, and explain what different people need for that weather. Ex. Today it is raining, and it is cold. The woman needs a raincoat and an umbrella.

asami925's submission: Average Rating:
Ich trage einen Hut, weil es kalt ist.
Du trägst ein Regenmantel, weil es regnet und kalt ist.
Sie trägt eine Sonnenbrille, weil es sonig und heiß ist.
Er trägt einen Schal, weil es kalt ist.
Du Hast einen Regenschirm, weil es regnet.
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  • Marvin
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    Hi Asami,

    Ich trage einen Hut (Mütze?), weil es kalt ist. Du trägst ein Regenmantel, weil es regnet und kalt ist. Sie trägt eine Sonnenbrille, weil es sonnig und heiß ist. Er trägt einen Schal, weil es kalt ist. Du hast einen Regenschirm, weil es regnet.

    (Ein Hut [with a rim] is usual more for shade and not so much to keep warm. Eine Mütze [woollen hat] is more for that purpose]

    Bye

    Marvin
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  • asami925
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    Hi Marvin

     

    Yes, Mütze would be right. But Livemocha taught me to wear Hut when it's cold!

    So it'll be ' Ich trage eine Mütze, weil es kalt ist.'

     

    Thanks.
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