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German Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 202, Unit 9, Lesson 2

Describe People

Instructions: Using the vocabulary words from this lesson, describe what six people (a man and a woman, he and she, you and I) are doing at this moment and what they did some time ago. Ex: The woman is opening the door. The woman opened the door an hour ago.

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Wenn ich in den Park gehe,laufe ich herum und manchmal fotografiere ich .Ich fotografiere besonders Kinder während sie spielen.
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  • Merman
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  • ehsan_kml
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    Not bad...Try to write more....You can't progress by writting just two lines ... :-" I expect you more ...

    khob baba hala chera mizani...shukhi kardam...man faghat fahmidam chi neveshti , dige 2rost ghalat boodanesh beine khodet o khoda...

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  • Chloé
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    Wenn ich in den Park gehe,

    laufe ich dort herum/gehe ich dort etwas spazieren und manchmal fotografiere ich. Ich fotografiere besonders Kinder, während sie spielen.

    Sehr schön, Minoo!
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