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German Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 102, Unit 4, Lesson 1

Going on Vacation

Instructions: Describe a vacation you are taking. When and where are you going? What are you going to do?

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Am der erste März bis der fünfzehnten April, Ich werde zu Neuseeland und Australien. Ich Komme aus Neuseeland, aber Ich wohne in Amerika. Ich kann nicht warten! Ich will sehen, Familie und Freunde, und Ich werde gehen surfen! Vielleicht Ich werde Gitarre spielen, und Shopping gehen, aber das Wichtigste ist meine kleinen Brüder, Ich muss Zeit damit verbringen, mit ihnen. =]
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