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German Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 2, Lesson 4

Describing Hairstyles

Instructions: Using both positive and negative characteristics, describe the hairstyles of six people: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and me. EX. The young girl does not have short hair. She has long hair.

Addy's submission: Average Rating:
eine schwartz haare.
kurtz haare
lange haare
lockige haare
eine Glatze.
Bart
schnurrbart
Er hat lange haare
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  • sh_chris
    Mochapoints: 24084  |  Teacher Score: 19683 (93%)

    Hallo = )

    (...) Er hat lange Haare.

    The rest are no sentences, you just make a list of words - that's not enough! ;-))  Sorry ...
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  • WinterSchnupfen
    Mochapoints: 18052  |  Teacher Score: 13377 (100%)

    I agree with sh_chris, but the spelling of the words you enlisted is correct except for "kurze" and the nouns that you didn't captalize (Haare, Schnurrbart).
    Submitted over a year ago
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