What are people doing?
Instructions:
Using the vocabulary from this lesson, describe the activities that six people are doing: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and I. EX. The postman often pushes a cart in the morning.
Hindi Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 102, Unit 5, Lesson 5
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woh ladka usne apna backpack nahin utha rakha hai.woh cycle par sawar hai..
Choti ladki usni laal Cart keench rahi hai aur muskura rahi hai..
Aadmi ghar me aa gaye aur battian jalaa raha hai.Woh sopha par bathne hai aur khana ka raha hai..
Meri bahin deewar par jhuki hai lekin main ek kitab padh rahi hoon.
Choti ladki usni laal Cart keench rahi hai aur muskura rahi hai..
Aadmi ghar me aa gaye aur battian jalaa raha hai.Woh sopha par bathne hai aur khana ka raha hai..
Meri bahin deewar par jhuki hai lekin main ek kitab padh rahi hoon.
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not kheench but kheench. not me but mai. gaye is used for plura, gaya for singular. reha singular and rehe plural
"Ladka ne apna backpack nahin utha rakha hai. Woh cycle par sawar hai.. Choti ladki laal cart kheench rahi hai aur muskura rahi hai.. Aadmi ghar mein aa gaya aur battian jalaa raha hai. Woh sofa par baitha hai aur khana ka raha hai.. Meri bahen deewar par jhuki hai lekin main ek kitab padh rahi hoon."
Here is another way of saying or writing the first line in hindi:
"Us ladke ne apna backpack nahin utha rakha hai." Only in this context, the word 'ladke' is used as a singular..
Overall it is excellent! Nicely written.. :)
Hi friend,
It's a nice submission from you. Here are some correction/suggestion for you. Hope it will useful for you. woh Us ladke us ne apna backpack nahin utha rakha hai.( Your first sentence is correct but it is better you should write as "Us ladke ne apna backpack utha nahin rakha hai.)woh cycle par sawar hai.. Choti ladki usni laal Cart kheench rahi hai aur muskura rahi hai.. Aadmi ghar me aa gaya aur battian jalaa raha hai.(If you want to write for some men then you have to write gaye, rahe hain)Woh sofa/sofe par batha hai aur khana kha raha hai.. Meri bahin deewar par jhuki hai lekin main ek kitab padh rahi hoon. Keep it up friend.
woh ladka usne apna backpack nahin utha rakha hai. -> the proper formation of this sentence will be... 'us ladke ne apna backpack nahin utha rakha hai.' (us->that)
Choti ladki usni laal Cart keench rahi hai aur muskura rahi hai..-> 'choti ladki laal cart kheench rahi hai aur muskura rahi hai.' (usni doesn't exist)
Aadmi ghar me aa gaye aur battian jalaa raha hai. -> 'Aadmi ghar me aa gaya hai aur battian jalaa raha hai.'
Woh sopha par bathne hai aur khana ka raha hai.. -> 'Woh sofe par baitha hai aur khana kha raha hai.'
Meri bahin deewar par jhuki hai lekin main ek kitab padh rahi hoon. -> 'Meri bahen deewar par jhuki hai lekin main ek kitaab padh rahi hoon.'
Good submission.. everything is fine.. :-)
thenk u very much nice explaination!!