Transportation
Instructions:
What kind of transportation do you use to get around town? What kind of transportation do you use to go on trips?
Hindi Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 102, Unit 5, Lesson 1
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मेरे पास कार नहीं है l इसलिए जब मैं अपनी मित्र का घर जाती हूँ तब मैं पैदल जाती हूँ l मैं माल को बस से जाती हूँ l अगर मैं दुसरे देश जाना चाहती हूँ तब मैं हवाई जहाज़ पर चढ़ती हूँ l मैं बीच को साईकिल से जाती हूँ l मेरे देश में सबवे नहीं है l जब मैं भारत गई थी तब मैं रिक्शो पर चढ़ी थी l रिक्शो बहुत अच्छे हैं और बहुत सस्ते भी हैं l मैं अपने बचपन में कभी-कभी घोड़ा पर चढ़ी थी l मैं राजस्थान में एक ऊंट पर चढ़ी थी l
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Go where ever u want but don't forget to take care of urself and also to share good things with me which u have seen here and there :)))))
Excellent Lissie...But you need to mend Your Minor mistakes.......
Just keep up your great work Lissie.....
Chillz
good.
Good job. Keep it up!
Hi Lissie, आपने बहुत अच्छा लिखा है | कुछ बहुत ही छोटी mistake हैं .
मैं नगर में (Lissie here में is not required to write) बस से जाती हूँl मेरा मेरे शहर में सबवे नहीं हैl जब मैं दुसरे देश जाती जा रही हूँ तब मैं हवाई जहाज़ से जा रही जाती हूँl जब मैं बूएनोस आइरेस जाती हूँ तब मैं नाव से जाती हूँl Lissie in the first sentence, you need not to write में because it is well understood that you are going to city. Although Nagar and shahar is same but it is better to write shahar as it is more common than the nagar. In the second sentence it is मेरे and not मेरा OK. In the third sentence your sentence is in present continuous tense means "you are going to other country at the time of your writing this sentence " but you have used जब (when) so it means you wanted to tell some thing of the past. In this sense you have to write "जब (when) मैं दूसरे देश जाती हूँ, तब (then) मैं हवाई जहाज से जाती हूँ |
Please continue practicing Hindi you are doing very well dear. My best wishes are with you and always.
Mr. Surendra has reviewed your submission very well and I agree with his interpretation.
Nice work dear...Keep going!
I think the text is very highly understandable. More so because you have used the script.
There are minor mistakes but I think you can forget about them.
What more can I say! Just brilliant :-)
Good Attempt.
Get Flash string(11) "transparent"
अगर मैं दुसरे देश जाना चाहती हूँ तब मैं हवाई जहाज़ पर चढ़ती हूँ
This sentence doesnt make sense.
Its Rikshe, not riksho,
मैं अपने बचपन में कभी-कभी घोड़ा पर चढ़ी थी, this also is wrong, it needs one Kabhi
thank you
इसलिए जब मैं अपनी ("apni" if "mitr" is feminine or "apne" if "mitr" is masculine) मित्र का (ke) घर जाती हूँ तब मैं पैदल जाती हूँ
रिक्शो - rikshe
घोड़ा (ghode) पर चढ़ी थी
Great Job!!
gud
"Ati Sunder"