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Hindi Writing Exercise (All Levels)

Course 101, Unit 3, Lesson 3

When are the activities?

Instructions: Provide the time for the activities of six people: a woman, a man, a girl, a boy, you and me. EX. The girls are reading a book at nine o’clock. The boys play in the bedroom at seven thirty.

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Aurat din din subah sawa cheh baje mandir ja rahi hai.Aadmi subah sadhe nau baje daftar ja raha hai.woh ghar ko sam ko pone saat baje waaapas aaega.Ladki dopahar dhaai baje khelne ja rahi hai.Woh pandrah minute mein ghar ko waaapas aaega.Ladka raat dus baje sone keliye ja raha hai.Main abi paanch minute mein college jana hai.Tum kal subah pone saat baje mera ghar ko aa ho.Hum padh sakthe hain.
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  • Rakesh Bhargava
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    Main Mujhe abi paanch minute mein college jana hai.Tum kal subah pone saat baje merea ghar ko aa ho.Hum padh sakthe hain.

     

    A very good job done.bahut badiya.

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  • Mukund Chaskar
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    Aurat HAR din.......JAATI hai.  Woh....SHAAM...

    Could U tell  Jaa rahaa hai,  padh rahi hai = What U want to tell ?  He is going or he goes,  reading or reads.  Pl specify.

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  • ABHIJIT
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    okay good work.

    follow corrections by users.

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  • Harish
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    Aadami subah sadhe nau baje daftar ja raha/jata he. (If this is routine work than you can use present indefinite tense, ....JATA/JATI HAI.)

    Main Mujhe abhi paanch minute me....., Tum kal pone saat baje mera mere ghar aa rahe ho. (Here no need to use KO)

    Good efforts. Please follow the corrections by other members specially by Muknd.

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  • mythrayee
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    Aurat har din subah sawa cheh baje mandir ja rahi hai. Aadmi subah sadhe nau baje daftar ja raha hai. Woh ghar ko shaam ko pone saat baje waapas aaega. Ladki dopahar dhaai baje khelne ja rahi hai. Woh pandrah minute mein ghar waapas aaega. Ladka raat dus baje sone keliye ja raha hai. Mujhe abi paanch minute mein college jana hai. Tum kal subah pone saat baje mere ghar ko aao. Hum padh sakthe hain.

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  • Shivashish
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    little bit misakes

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  • Shivashish
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  • kirit
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    good

    Submitted over a year ago

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