Transportation
Instructions:
What kind of transportation do you use to get around town? What kind of transportation do you use to go on trips?
Hindi Writing Exercise (All Levels)
Course 102, Unit 5, Lesson 1
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Samantaya, main kaam par train se jaati hoon,
lekin kabhi kabhi main bas se jati hoon.
Main ratri mein akele taxi se yatra karti hoon.
Jab main Buenos Aires se bahar jana hota hai to main Hawai Jahaz se jaati hoon.
lekin kabhi kabhi main bas se jati hoon.
Main ratri mein akele taxi se yatra karti hoon.
Jab main Buenos Aires se bahar jana hota hai to main Hawai Jahaz se jaati hoon.
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Jab main mujhe Buenos Aires se bahar jana hota hai to main Hawai Jahaz se jaati hoon.
Bahut hi uamada sahelli ki Hindi hai ..
Subham
Jab main Buenos Aires se bahar jana hota hai to main Hawai Jahaz se jaati hoon.
yahaan par jab mujhey aayegaa. baaki sab theek hai. keep it up.
ratri is very much pure word
use rath it arjust with normal talk ...
Excellent Leah, Just a small correction for you.
Samantaya, main kaam par train se jaati hoon, lekin kabhi-kabhi main bas se bhi jati hoon. Main ratri mein akele taxi se yatra karti hoon. Jab main mujhe Buenos Aires se bahar jana hota hai to main Hawai Jahaz se jaati hoon. (when you write the same word like kabhi-kabhi then put the given mark in between them. Bhi means "TOO" in english so when you use lekin in these types of sentences then you should use BHI too. In the last sentence you should use MUJHE instead of MAIN. You can use Main in this way " Jab main Buenos Aires se bahar jati hun tab main main hawai jahaz se jaati hun."
mydear leah ,its wonderful review, but we can talk in normal way like these words samantaya is jayadatar, ratri main is rat ko.but you write wonderful hindi,you did excellent job,good keep it up.
Samantaya, main kaam par train se jaati hoon, lekin kabhi kabhi main bas se jati hoon. Main ratri mein (raat ko )akele taxi se yatra karti hoon. Jab main (mujhe) Buenos Aires se bahar jana hota hai to main Hawai Jahaz se jaati hoon.
Good going...
you are doing very good. in the last line there wold be MUJHE (Jab MUJHE Buenos Aires se bahar jana hota hai to main Hawai Jahaz se jaati hoon). MAIN is 1st person and MUJHE is 3rd person. good luck. keep it up.